i've been drawing up some panel layouts, trying to decide how to tackle this story visually.
its actually really hard, because there are so many possibilities, that i dont know what the best choices are.
but i guess practice it the only way.
and outside input.
having never made a comic (...well, there was "i am the cheese", but that doesnt count.) its hard to know if the story is flowing, and the pacing is good.
here is a test panel i chose from the ones i've drawn, because it looked the best.
i find it hard to get a clean line when drawing digitally, so i may draw this traditionally.
though the upside of digital is being able to transform what you've drawn. and the undo button.
i wish my life had an undo button.