PAGE 01

this is page 01 of my comic. i was just wondering if people wanted to give any feed back? or maybe i should colour a few more pages for that.

think im going in the right direction with it?

more to come soon.


EDIT:

heres some line work for page 02

OBSERVATIONAL

was out observational drawing today. accordion guy playing away, sun shining, a couple of mormons telling me to pray - all in all a nice day.

i drew a few in a more stylised way, so i decided to colour them.

both of these people were in waterstones. the womans bag was immense, so i had to draw it (she didnt look as seedy as this though :p ) 

PAINTING NO.2

more photoshop practise (practice? practise?)

tried to spend less time on this one. i think it turned out ok. some things i would chage, but i didnt want to get too pernickety.

SHOOP PRACTISE

MEET FRANKIE

i have finally got round to doing proper panel layout stuff. 

you probably wont be able to understand whats going on, but when i get phillip to check the full-size pagees i've done, i'll post them.

i've still to come up with a title for it as well :/

i think the name Alina means "light", but not sure Light is a good name. i was looking up latin for light, but thats not an interesting name either. so, i'll need to keep trying with the title thing.

and here is the other two characters, Frankie and Rob